Alison R
40 Campion Rd
Gisborne
5 November 2020
Dear Phil
I am writing this letter to thank you for your hard work and making camp a lot better.
Personally I thought you were a great camp helper. It's great you came on camp.
Hopefully next time we can go to Rotorua together we could go onto the luge together. Thank you so much for coming to camp and making it x100 better,
One of my highlights for me was Paradise Valley when we got to feed the deer and drink the spring water, also because of the underwater cave. I thought that was pretty cool.
Again, thank you so much for coming and supporting the camp.
Mā te wā
Alison
Bula Alison,
ReplyDeleteIt is lovely to thank people who have helped. You have written a thoughtful letter to your Dad and I am sure he wull love reading it. He was a BIG help to us on camp.
You need to tell your readers a little bit about camp before you post your letter. You also need to back space to remove the large amount of 'white space' under your letter.
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden